Good improvements...
The rhythms way better, you did a great job on that and the vocals are fucking siiiiickkkk man. Good sample choices, however I hate to say that with completely re-working your track, completely new problems have arisen. I know it's a short loop, but lets hear some more variety from that bassy reese. Automate some pitch shifts. Try experimenting with a little distortion on it. It has some nice groove to it, but lets hear some more experimentation. Also, that snare needs to be a bit stronger.
The more I listen to it, the better it sounds, but there's always room for improvement. Try those things out and jest re-upload the sub later if you get something you like. You don't even have to deal with the AP. Just go to your menu and edit this track then re upload. Also, I listened to that intro piece you did. It sounded sick, but I didn't want to leave a review for it. Dunno exactly why, but it was just one of those moments when I didn't really feel like it was necessary :P