Lol, I'm getting Circa Survive vibes from this. Your voice is incredible. Damn good pitch control. Sorry to point this out but I'm guessing english isn't your primary language? What kind of accent am I hearing? Again, it's not important. I just love accents.
My inner critic wants to point out that the bass drum could be a little softer. A filter can trim those highs. Your mixer might have a treble knob, I use Reason. Not sure if you want this kind of feedback but I typically splice three separate bass drums through an EQ, Compressor, and stereo imager before sending the final sound to a drum mixer. So much fidelity control, drool*
Bass drums benefit widely from alternate note velocities too. I don't even think about it anymore, I just randomly grab bass notes and drop the velocities to create dynamics.
But I'm listening to this on my phone, so literally disregard everything I just told you.