Track is pretty good but that second segment from 1:40 onward was tops. Loved that plucky pad. Next on the list of skills to aquire is some sidechaining to get those drums punching forward. Snare has such a huge envelope, I'd start with just the bass drum. Slap a compressor on the lead synth/bass, then use the levels of the bass drum to control the levels of the synths via signal flow. A compressor unit should have a sidechain function. Would clean things up a bit :)
Not sure if you pan much but playing with that in the future gives you more space to work with. Someone once described it to me by saying that panning creates the illusion sounds are louder than they really are. You can pan things then turn their levels down a little. Makes more room for other sounds in the mix when everything gets it's own place in the field :D
Keep pushing Dieswyx, this work is really promising.