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I said I wasn't going to drop a review, but I just noticed that you suffered from the in justice of a zero vote parade. Fuck those brats. This track deserves better...honestly. I hate immature little snobs. They probably don't even listen to the tracks. The only track that deserves a zero, is one with nothing on it. Honestly, there should be a hook up, that allows mods to follow zero voters and ban them or something. Really though, this track is sick.
Hmmm....
Trying to keep in mind that it's not your style...
Hmm, sounded a little weak. I'm not trying to insult you, it was nice for what it was, but I think you could have used a stronger drum. It sounded cheap. Not just the snare, but the bass and the hi hats sounded pretty bad. The rhythem wasn't that bad, it was just the sound of it.
The whistle melody was iery and cool. The claps fit nicely. I think the synth cold have used a bit more bass behind it. For a song titled "let the pianos play" it could have used a little more piano. The little piano melody was just, too simple. In anycase, the song loops really well. I didn't even know when it was looping :P
I'd say to go back and work on this some more, but address the problems your reviewers leave you with. I think this song could be more powerful. It's just missing stuff. It's not bad, it just doesn't sound like your using profesional equipment/presets. I don't know how true that is, maybe not at all, but if that's what it sounds like, then it doesn't really matter whether you did or didn't.
And please, don't look at my review like it's an insult. I'm just trying to help. You have some really cool tracks. You're dnb stuf is sick. I'm not sure if hip hop is where you should invest your talent. I think it belittles your real talent. I'm listening to malfunction right now,...damn sick. I'm giving this a three, but I'm giving malfunction a five...I'd drop a review on it too, but I fell like I've typed up enough here. Again, i'm sorry if I sound condensending or something.
Hey, there's always the critics man. Where ever you go, you see them. Some are good ones, some basically slap your face.
Para-Noid
Taffyyyyyy
Like,...sex in my ears. Yeeesssssssss. haha
EARFUKCS
Teehee.
Holy cow, you put alot of work into this track. So much more than the preview...guh, I loved that sound at the begining. Right cool man, right cool. The vox from the original track sounds so, appropriate, everywhere you used it. The intro was so slick, magical, sexy. The drums,...yessssss, Basssssss, ARRR.
hmm, It doesn't sound as full though, it's deffinatly missing something I think. It's clean, but you could have used some background here and there...it's a little too clean if you ask me. Arguably though, it sounds better when I turn the volume up :P
Dunno, It's still good all around, those ambient melodies make me quite happy. Quite so. Indeed, jolly-o
I'm glad you liked this so much!
I also kinda thought that the song was missing something while I was making it, but I tried not to overdo it and keep it simple, so I ended up just working more on the stuff I already had down.
Thanks again! Check the Benny Hill mix!
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Hmmm, the piano sounded nice. Wasn't very complicated, but it was well composed and sexy like. The main melody really dug into me. The effected stand up bass sounding thing might have been a little too prominent though as my speakers could pick up...either some fuzz or the plucking or reverb or something...dunno, something about that sounded off. The way it accented every note in 4/4 was a little too repetitive as well...one note...over and over again...garrrr. At least the high pitched whatever noise on the up beat helped a little. The ambient noises fading around were a nice touch too...the synth melody works well too with the composition as a whole, it accents the piano nicely...most of the track accents the piano nicely.
This is pretty good. It needs alot, but it holds pretty solid on it's own. Next romp out, try playing with more piano. I'd say you did a good job here, really! Keep up the good work, and I hop my feedback dosn't come off as mean. I'm just trying to help :P
pishaw! Taffy.
Right on man! This track is sick. It's not complex or anything, but it's chill, and that bass drum/ bass on every 4th note is a nice touch. The break down thing was slick. All the melodies really flow. All in all, you did a nice job with this, I can tell you really worked hard.
Good luck in the comp! I'm rooting for you!
Thankyou Quarl! I appreciate you taking the time to review my entry for me - so I have an idea of what how it turned out. If you need a return review just pm me ;).
Meowwazzzaaaaa
Sweet deal, I just started listening to your stuff today, I really like it man. Really though, it makes me happy. This song deffinatly has some sick vibes to it. The bass is so heavy, it's like "ARG, I eat alot" in a good way though, you know, like that jolly uncle kind of eat alot? No? Sorry...
The drums are really repetitve, but at least there some cool cymbal variations. I was thrown off when the track changed paced suddenly, but I was able to mantain my posture and find a grove again. Quite a splendid sound you got, I ask you sir, keep on keeping on, for anohter six pages and so on! Taffyfffyffyyyyyy
Teehee.
haha, bored writing a paper :P
Eh, I know the feeling. In anycase, neat track. It's really simple, but it reminds me of old school newgrounds...you should submit this to the audio comp going on in the forumns if you havn't allready. I think this might do all right.
Quarl, thanks for the reivew!
Yeah, this song was made when I was writing my Senior Paper...boredom struck, and all I could do is think of this beat in my head. haha
Thanks for the review
Yarrr
har, you got some nice sound here. I love the way the melodies flow about like sauce...kind of makes me hungry. As a drummer, i'm not a fan of the generic trance four to the floor thing that goes on, but whatever. At least it's powerful here. It accents the sound nicely. Great job here. Deffinatly worth a download and a vote.
MMM sauce. I'm also a drummer, and don't really like that thing you said either... I just felt it fit here... isnt that what trance is? I donno... I just think it makes it feel so much more UMPHY or powerful like you said when you have a basic beat.
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