RAWR
Hmm, nice easy tempo, some fair piano, some ambient percussion...this is a really lax track. Interesting synthetic instrument you used...came in at around 00:40. When it cuts in and out it reminds me of a hearing test. Gotta raise the correct hand. lol. I don't feel like I have proper feedback to provide because it all sounds really good...oh wait. Those drums...I'm sorry. I guess I should have waited instead of jumping straight into the review. The rhythm isn't the problem. It's a fair rhythm. The drum set you used just sounds really bad. :( If it makes you feel any better, i'd have you know that the drums sound better on lower end speakers. I listened to the track again with my shitty lap top speakers ;D
All in all, this is a really chill track with some really cool elements thrown about liberally. Other than my gripes with the drums, there really isn't much wrong going on here. Keep on keeping on.