Quarl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Happy Valentine Day Maria]

Her hair!!! lol

Hhaha! The female character in your flash has almost the same hair style as the girl in mine but with differnt colors. Go check out my V-day flash, it's funny.

In any case I'd just like to say that you did a really good job with this. The art was good, and the animations were smooth. My only complaint would have to be how generic it was, but hey, thats Valentines day for you. Can't have a V-day with out a cliche or two right?

[The Rocket Knife]

Twas ok.

My only real gripe was that the audio quality was so bad. I had to squint my ears...and that wasn't easy. In any case, the jokes were unoriginal, but still funny. I laughed to myself. The animations were okay too. Not bad. But seriously, the file size gave you the potential to raise the audio quality a bit, so why didn't you?

[Zelda: link gets horny]

Meow.

What the hell? You can't just NOT animate Link and Zelda doing it. Regardless of whether or not they are little pixel people, I really wanted to see them get down!

Also, I would have ended the cartoon with Zelda getting pregnant. That would have been funnier if you ask me. Also, in relation to link and decapitation, I have a similar happening in my "Super Minority" toon. Except Link is the one doing the decapitating. Erm, don't watch it if you're easily offended.

But about your flash, seriously, nice job.

Emanhattan responds:

that would be kinda cheesy, and it has been made before
what I tried was to make this move 8whose Idea has been made before)
and add it a lot of good jokes, like the dance and shit.

[Movement project]

Sweet deal.

Haha. Awsome. I bet your teacher was suprised. I love doing stuff like that to my teachers. This one time, my english teacher asked for a three page essay and I gave him 22 pages. Arg. Some of the animations reminded me of Adam Phillips work.

The music stoped early at the end though, and cut off sort of at the begining... was that supposed to happen, because that really threw me off.

[The man without a life]

Who was that? Now I wil never know...

Im seeing alot of movies today that are forgetting to cite the music. It hurts me deeply when people forget to do that... :(

[The 12 Pains of Xmas]

Classic

My only gripe is that you didn't cite the music author.

EternalRabbit responds:

Fixed! under the commentary!

[The Death of Jared]

Hmmm...

Im sorry, but im not sure this is the ideal place to strike an anti drug campain. Some people just don't want to hear it. I personaly, like to watch cartoons that make me feel good, not guilty. If you lost someone, don't look to the internet for sympathy. Im sorry if I sound offensive, but honestly, this cartoon wasn't even that good. Or original. You didn't even bother to make your own characters. You just took a madness and killed him, something weve all seen hundreds of times.

Again, im sorry if my review seems a little harsh, but not everyone feels the same way you do. Please, put more work into your cartoons.

[Wander and the Colossus]

A ha.

This was a really good cartoon. My only gripe is that the frame by frame animations wern't so solid. Make some more mid frame animations you lazy bastard!

Other than that, everything was awesome. Keep making toons.

[Alas, A Stalker]

Eh.

You have a long ways to go. I gave you a five for the save points, but this toon probably deserved much less.

Things to work on...
-Higher frame rate. You're toon was way too chopy. It may be more work, but it's worth it, trust me.
-Color. It's not as hard as you think. You just have to make sure there arn't any gaps in you're shapes before you use the paint bucket tool.
-Sound. Music will go a long way pal. All you have to do is import a song (wav.), and put the song on a key frame.
-Fluidness (is that a word?) You don't have to make an entirely new drawing per every other frame. Erm,...what I mean is that I noticed places where objects changed positions when they didn't have to. Example: that table the guy was leaning on kept moving at ther begining. This type of problem is easy to avoid...but I don't think I can cover it in this review...

Im not taking it easy on you because you say it's you're second toon. In fact, im not taking it easy on you at all. My first frame by frame was way better than this. However, I think you have alot more potential than me. I can tell that if you take some of my advice to heart, you will aspire to be a kick ass animator. Shoot for the stars dude. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to email me.

reidavidson responds:

Ah ha, I'mma girl, not a "dude." XD;;; But thanks! I like that you gave me lots of good suggestions and hints. ^_^

[Niagara FALLS]

I love you.

The animation sucked, the sound was ok, but I loved this toon. It made me giggle. You should make another cartoon with the girl. Just have something bad happen to her again.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

watch my cartoon "Meet My Girlfriend"