Quarl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[PINKO on the prison boat]

That was good.

This cartoon has add. Good job though. The animation was smooth, the colors were, and the art was pretty good.

[Movement project]

Sweet deal.

Haha. Awsome. I bet your teacher was suprised. I love doing stuff like that to my teachers. This one time, my english teacher asked for a three page essay and I gave him 22 pages. Arg. Some of the animations reminded me of Adam Phillips work.

The music stoped early at the end though, and cut off sort of at the begining... was that supposed to happen, because that really threw me off.

[The man without a life]

Who was that? Now I wil never know...

Im seeing alot of movies today that are forgetting to cite the music. It hurts me deeply when people forget to do that... :(

[The 12 Pains of Xmas]

Classic

My only gripe is that you didn't cite the music author.

EternalRabbit responds:

Fixed! under the commentary!

[The Death of Jared]

Hmmm...

Im sorry, but im not sure this is the ideal place to strike an anti drug campain. Some people just don't want to hear it. I personaly, like to watch cartoons that make me feel good, not guilty. If you lost someone, don't look to the internet for sympathy. Im sorry if I sound offensive, but honestly, this cartoon wasn't even that good. Or original. You didn't even bother to make your own characters. You just took a madness and killed him, something weve all seen hundreds of times.

Again, im sorry if my review seems a little harsh, but not everyone feels the same way you do. Please, put more work into your cartoons.

[Wander and the Colossus]

A ha.

This was a really good cartoon. My only gripe is that the frame by frame animations wern't so solid. Make some more mid frame animations you lazy bastard!

Other than that, everything was awesome. Keep making toons.

[Alas, A Stalker]

Eh.

You have a long ways to go. I gave you a five for the save points, but this toon probably deserved much less.

Things to work on...
-Higher frame rate. You're toon was way too chopy. It may be more work, but it's worth it, trust me.
-Color. It's not as hard as you think. You just have to make sure there arn't any gaps in you're shapes before you use the paint bucket tool.
-Sound. Music will go a long way pal. All you have to do is import a song (wav.), and put the song on a key frame.
-Fluidness (is that a word?) You don't have to make an entirely new drawing per every other frame. Erm,...what I mean is that I noticed places where objects changed positions when they didn't have to. Example: that table the guy was leaning on kept moving at ther begining. This type of problem is easy to avoid...but I don't think I can cover it in this review...

Im not taking it easy on you because you say it's you're second toon. In fact, im not taking it easy on you at all. My first frame by frame was way better than this. However, I think you have alot more potential than me. I can tell that if you take some of my advice to heart, you will aspire to be a kick ass animator. Shoot for the stars dude. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to email me.

reidavidson responds:

Ah ha, I'mma girl, not a "dude." XD;;; But thanks! I like that you gave me lots of good suggestions and hints. ^_^