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Cory F. Jaeger
@Quarl
Age 35, ♀ she/her
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Alfred University
Groundhog Lake, Colorado
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@Quarl You should definitely incorporate sometime I think, haha
Heeey you actually got a Polar polaroid! :D A polarbear on roids, it looks like, on solar, bare and full of joy... the pole turned out a pretty comical touch there, though for sure would've been cool with the victory pole pose too!
The way you shift from innocent bright and wintery mountain views to cosmic copulations and all the more intimate Freudian slams though dang. Flower types that symbolize love and friendship, that could be left on a grave, Freud maybe a reflection of complex emotional bonds and all, a longing for something that's out of reach, or understanding, or both... seems like the poem maybe went deeper than you'd want it to; thus is written in a way that makes it seem it maybe isn't. Or that it maybe really isn't, that it's more so a raw and playful reflection on such things, and I overanalyze as usual.
Good poetry seems to be a kind you can't read just once though; that of which the message isn't obvious or singular; that means something, so that really was a good one hmm, whatever the intention... thanks for sharing. She would be proud of all you do now surely! Even the explicitly introspective and/or sexual stuff.
Good audio and all Quarl! TY for the promised picture! Happy tidings to you as well!
Deep feelings, thanks for the time today friend! I'm in town doing chores today so I might be a little short in my response but I'd expect a word smith to analyze all the words and ideas! Rhymes don't write themselves :p
I responded to your review in regards to substance use but if you wanted to continue that conversation here or in private message, it's cool. I'm not a spiritual person but sharing a roll with my husband is probably the single most profound truth I have ever felt. If I could spend a millenia trying to become a single organism with him via constant grinding, I totally would D:
Gotta run!
Mhm understanding's the key to healing too I think, hopefully I'm just scratching the surface; you know the depth of all this yourself. :)
XD Will do; all the best!
Heartening comments! NGBSC season 2 will be hosted so prepare for your second phase >:)
That's awesome!! Tbh I wouldn't mind judging, I'm not a fan of having to defend silly titles. Keep me in the loop please! I also might have a little PayPal money coming in from a project I'm working on, I'd donate a small amount to a prize pool. I'd love to help make the second time around better :3
nice poem. but what makes a poem fruedian?
Comedic misdirection, "Fruedian" often implies sexual feelings, in this case for one's own mother. Instead the poem was about how sexually attracted I literally am to Frued. I AM SO WACKY, WAKKA WAKKA WAKKA D: D: D:
Epic poetry! Also thanks for the follow!
The pressure of making art can take a toll on people for sure, but in the end it's always nice when you're brought right back to earth and reminded of why you're doing it in the first place. Also how is your new friend now? Has she gotten armor yet?
Melty. We keep getting fresh snow every so often but it's too warm to sculpt with and I've lost interest :c
Bleak-Creep
Such beautiful poetry, and such magical friends you’ve been creating for yourself lately.
They might not last forever, but those memories of popping a rock into their eye socket will last a lifetime.
Quarl
Should I quit my music and start writing poetry full time?