Quarl's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[An Ambiguous Short]

Hmm, too short, work more.

Good: Colors (grey, brown, sexy, always a good combination), lines (smooth), sound (for the most part, I didn't get to hear alot because the toon was too short), frame consistency (no over loads)...

Bad: Clouds (some go one way while the others go another I figured out that the cloud was supposed to be following the boy, but I think it would have looked better if you just left the boy without a cloud, also, clouds arn't solid. Him landing on a solid cloud is a little weird.) The text at the begining was too long (I was starting to get bored), the character running was not fluent enough, try removing some of the extra frames.

I just want to know, is there gonna be a finished version of this, or is this it? Because I'd love to see the rest of this down the road.

BritishMoose responds:

Great review. It's not a particularly realistic piece (i think it's quite experimental), so the cloud comment isn't at the top of my concern list. The comment on the animation and timing of the text though, that's really useful - I'll remember that.

I didn't intend to make this a longer project, but the lack of length seems to be a major issue, so i'm considering pulling it off Newgrounds (unless it does better than I'm expecting) and adding more substance to it.

Thanks again for the review, great to hear exactly what you think about my stuff :D

[Zelda: link gets horny]

Meow.

What the hell? You can't just NOT animate Link and Zelda doing it. Regardless of whether or not they are little pixel people, I really wanted to see them get down!

Also, I would have ended the cartoon with Zelda getting pregnant. That would have been funnier if you ask me. Also, in relation to link and decapitation, I have a similar happening in my "Super Minority" toon. Except Link is the one doing the decapitating. Erm, don't watch it if you're easily offended.

But about your flash, seriously, nice job.

Emanhattan responds:

that would be kinda cheesy, and it has been made before
what I tried was to make this move 8whose Idea has been made before)
and add it a lot of good jokes, like the dance and shit.

[The 12 Pains of Xmas]

Classic

My only gripe is that you didn't cite the music author.

EternalRabbit responds:

Fixed! under the commentary!

[Alas, A Stalker]

Eh.

You have a long ways to go. I gave you a five for the save points, but this toon probably deserved much less.

Things to work on...
-Higher frame rate. You're toon was way too chopy. It may be more work, but it's worth it, trust me.
-Color. It's not as hard as you think. You just have to make sure there arn't any gaps in you're shapes before you use the paint bucket tool.
-Sound. Music will go a long way pal. All you have to do is import a song (wav.), and put the song on a key frame.
-Fluidness (is that a word?) You don't have to make an entirely new drawing per every other frame. Erm,...what I mean is that I noticed places where objects changed positions when they didn't have to. Example: that table the guy was leaning on kept moving at ther begining. This type of problem is easy to avoid...but I don't think I can cover it in this review...

Im not taking it easy on you because you say it's you're second toon. In fact, im not taking it easy on you at all. My first frame by frame was way better than this. However, I think you have alot more potential than me. I can tell that if you take some of my advice to heart, you will aspire to be a kick ass animator. Shoot for the stars dude. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to email me.

reidavidson responds:

Ah ha, I'mma girl, not a "dude." XD;;; But thanks! I like that you gave me lots of good suggestions and hints. ^_^

[Niagara FALLS]

I love you.

The animation sucked, the sound was ok, but I loved this toon. It made me giggle. You should make another cartoon with the girl. Just have something bad happen to her again.

JunkYardAnimations responds:

watch my cartoon "Meet My Girlfriend"

[Dare Matt To Move]

I thought it was good.

The only reason why I gave you a zero is because im an asshole. Still I thought it was funny. That mans dancing is like sweet nector on bread. Anyways, im leaving you a good review. It's the least I can do after giving you a zero for no apparent reason other than pissing you off.

BrerSteve responds:

Actually it doesn't piss me off in the least.. I put next to no effort to get this together... I'm just curious to hear what people think of it. Blam or no blam.

[SOJH- Boner]

rofl

Allthough the flash never really left it's initail starting point (the kid sat in the chair the whole time) Im gonna give you a nice score because I thought it was really funny. Also I thought the music was goig to suck, but it ended up being really funny. You wouldn't happen to know the song "she broke my dick" by the band All would you?

ReklessCreati0n responds:

no i don't, but i'll make sure i look for their CD, i'll have to check that song out :) yeah, it was lazy animation, but it took a long time

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I saw this before

Didn't you try to submit this yesterday?

TruffleClock responds:

You are a liar, this is not a resubmit.

[Cool Things 014]

hmmmmm

Uhhhh...im afraid to say that I liked that. I must have some weired problem or something. I don't really know. Your animating skills are prominent, but the flash has no real point to it.

FLCLmonkey responds:

I will call you a old person smelling toe fungus as your nasty name for telling me to have a point.

And no weird problem, you just enjoy random :D

[Pikmin: Reality Check]

Pikmin, alright.

I love pikmin. Good job. I hate Hanson...bad job.

Kapungo responds:

Fair enough.