Score: 5

"Hmmm..."

submission: The Death of Jared

date: December 21, 2006

Im sorry, but im not sure this is the ideal place to strike an anti drug campain. Some people just don't want to hear it. I personaly, like to watch cartoons that make me feel good, not guilty. If you lost someone, don't look to the internet for sympathy. Im sorry if I sound offensive, but honestly, this cartoon wasn't even that good. Or original. You didn't even bother to make your own characters. You just took a madness and killed him, something weve all seen hundreds of times.

Again, im sorry if my review seems a little harsh, but not everyone feels the same way you do. Please, put more work into your cartoons.

Score: 9

"A ha."

submission: Wander and the Colossus

date: December 1, 2006

This was a really good cartoon. My only gripe is that the frame by frame animations wern't so solid. Make some more mid frame animations you lazy bastard!

Other than that, everything was awesome. Keep making toons.

Score: 5

"Eh."

submission: Alas, A Stalker

date: November 27, 2006

You have a long ways to go. I gave you a five for the save points, but this toon probably deserved much less.

Things to work on...
-Higher frame rate. You're toon was way too chopy. It may be more work, but it's worth it, trust me.
-Color. It's not as hard as you think. You just have to make sure there arn't any gaps in you're shapes before you use the paint bucket tool.
-Sound. Music will go a long way pal. All you have to do is import a song (wav.), and put the song on a key frame.
-Fluidness (is that a word?) You don't have to make an entirely new drawing per every other frame. Erm,...what I mean is that I noticed places where objects changed positions when they didn't have to. Example: that table the guy was leaning on kept moving at ther begining. This type of problem is easy to avoid...but I don't think I can cover it in this review...

Im not taking it easy on you because you say it's you're second toon. In fact, im not taking it easy on you at all. My first frame by frame was way better than this. However, I think you have alot more potential than me. I can tell that if you take some of my advice to heart, you will aspire to be a kick ass animator. Shoot for the stars dude. If you have any questions, don't be afraid to email me.

Score: 6

"I love you."

submission: Niagra FALLS

date: November 27, 2006

The animation sucked, the sound was ok, but I loved this toon. It made me giggle. You should make another cartoon with the girl. Just have something bad happen to her again.

Score: 9

"Indeed..."

submission: RevoWii!!!!!

date: April 30, 2006

Well, look on the bright side. At least it's not called Game Cube 360.

Score: 10

"I thought it was good."

submission: Dare Matt To Move

date: March 19, 2006

The only reason why I gave you a zero is because im an asshole. Still I thought it was funny. That mans dancing is like sweet nector on bread. Anyways, im leaving you a good review. It's the least I can do after giving you a zero for no apparent reason other than pissing you off.

Score: 10

"On the case of crumzworth..."

submission: West Pole TV 1

date: March 7, 2006

Crumzworth said..."first off this was good, but i am rather pissed off. i am in the middle of making a very simalar flash. i mean wierd. it has asian jokes, lemonade stands, asian jokes, and splineter cell refrances. oh well, at least i dont have a boner"

Why does this concern me? Well you see im also working on the cartoon with him. Have been for a while now. Don't get me wrong, I loved the toon. I just wanted to point out that while our two toons have a few similarities, the two cartoons are entirely differnt. I got scared when my friend sent me a link saying "our cartoon has been high jacked!". Im so very glad thats not the case. Any way, keep making good toons.

Score: 7

"Put more effort in to your work."

submission: Kingdom Hearts Universe

date: February 26, 2006

The frame by frame animation was too slow, the magic and atmospheric effects could have used alot of work, I didn't enjoy the shape tweens, a story would have been nice, I didn't like the way some things would change color in mid motion. Really this could have been a better cartoon if you just put more effort in to it.

But on the other hand, I did like some of the character drawings, I liked the music, and regardless of how bad the actual animation was, it's still apparent of just how much time you spent on the cartoon as a whole. I want to see more of you in the future, but please try to improve your animations.

Score: 7

"A better ending maybe?"

submission: Action Figure Assination

date: February 13, 2006

You should have made the blue guy keep fighting after his head had been cut off. That would have been funny.

Score: 8

"Dane Cook is the man."

submission: Dane Cook -Joke Board-

date: February 12, 2006

I love Dane Cook, and I laughed, but this isn't much of a cartoon. Oh well. Im still giving this a really good score.